2nd Rock Song Called Teachers Pet (Need help)

So yeah It my 2nd song called Teachers pet. If anone would like top help that would be nice if not thats still nice too.

Teacher Pet:

I was the new kid
You knew the school
With so many friends
I thought you were cool



You walked up to me
and told me your name
For all of our differences,
we were the same.


Pre-Chorus ?

Chorus?


Yeah, we had fights.
Who's wrong, who's right?
They ended fast
were soon in the past



School bell rung
Forgotten and (gone) or (hung) ?
If we havent ever met
I wouldnt been your pet




Pre-Chorus ?

Chorus?

More?

It's difficult without a chorus. I'd say before we know if we need a pre-chorus, we need to have the chorus. I'm assuming it's a bit of a joke, and the person he's talking to, who sounds like it's a cool kid, is actually the teacher? And I assume that the chorus is where this will be revealed.

Here's my critique of what's there: your rhyme scheme changes after the first chorus. An AABB rhyme scheme sounds very rambly. It doesn't sound like the lines connect, whereas an ABAB or ABCB rhyme scheme sounds more cohesive. It forces you to look ahead in the lyric and makes each verse mean something more.

I might save the idea of "we got into some fights" for the bridge. That's a very funny idea to be saying that to someone who seems like a friend, but is actually a teacher. We also don't have enough of the story and relationship set up, yet.

I like the idea. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Man Thx for even reading over it! I will take your ideas that will help me with the song. thx a million!