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Thank you very much, J. Lee!! I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to do this! I think it sounds better. I was unsure about the changes in the first few measures (the parallel fifths between the tenor and bass that I had written to begin with were definitely intentional, btw), but as I listened, it grew on me. I was just so used to hearing it the way I had written it that my mind resisted the change at first. I like the changes to some of the harmonies that you made, without changing the chords. I have one question though. Do you think I should change the tenor on the third beat of measure 29 to a Bb, or do you think it sounds better on the Ab? I keep hearing the Bb in my head for some reason, and it just feels like it should be that way. Is there a reason why it shouldn't? Just wondering!
Thanks again,
-Adam
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