PainoGuy
I find this a just okay peice becuse it is a bit boring
Good:
1. I loved the harmonies
2. Liked the thought of not starting every melody at once with every instrument playing but more like a fugue
3. I think it was good vioce leading by not always sending the voices in the same direction like it should be
except: mm 26 beat 4 onto 30
Okay
1. I did not like when all the voices stopped all togather I believe it should of been more flowing like if you would stop two voices and the others countinue and you do the oppisite a little later with the others continuing
Examples to fix: mm 15 & mm 7
2. and this is maybe just me but I would of liked more 1/8 notes to make it a little more lively and
P.S These are just suggestions you don't have to listen to them
I might just be mubbling and making sense but hopefully it helps
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