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nice.
I like this a lot. There is some good stuff in there. I'm not the right person to critique something but I may as well try. I like the blend between oboe and cello throught this. Maybe the piano part is a little annoying in the sense that it's really really boring to play. Sure it sounds good, and it does, but a person would rather beat themselves over the head a sledgehammer than play these chords over and over and over and over and over and over again. Maybe there should be a place where the pianist gets to show off that he can play more than chords, like arpeggios or something? and the end part sounds good, but is it suddeny supposed to get faster like that, maybe a rallentando (awesome word eh?) leading into it or just smooth it up a bit.
So, great job, I look forward to seeing this finished. Maybe with different movements?
>Mitchell<
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