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Old Jul 17 2006, 12:19 PM
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Very nice pieces!

To me, the minuet does sound like. But the Scherzo as much as I like doesn't really hold
traditional definition of a scherzo, and that's ok if that's what you intended. I'm not sure
if you know but, scherzos have been traditionally in a triple meter as that's what gave the
scherzo its musical personality. But I still like the piece! Both the minuet and scherzo sound
have such a fun-loving musical personality to them in both the violin and piano parts!
I do think you should consider adding at least another movement and make it a multi-movement
piece of some kind whether sonata or something else. Maybe you could continue it as a suite
for violin and piano? Just a suggestion.
Overall, I thought the pieces were great. They all seemed really well thought out. I did listen
to the adagio and I know you didn't like it. But I really didn't see what there was not to like about it.
But, that's just me. Anyway, good job and keep it up!
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