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Hi there.
Nice piece. The drums have a rather nice sound to them - may I ask how they were made?
As for critisism - musically, I have none - this is your thing. I did find that the string attack was sometimes a bit slow - especially in the early section (around 2:00) and through that the rhythm of the faster string part got lost somewhat. This is better when the BIG drums come in just after that.
Also the opening string section - might be nice if you could find a way to stop it sounding like you played the chords on the keyboard - splitting each 'line' up and playing it individually I find is quite a nice way. You would instinctively play the notes more legato and appropriately more for the bass notes, which doesn't happen when you simply -boom- play the chord.
Not so keen on your avatar though - all those guns! What are you, American?!
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