johannhowitzer

I hate to have to say this, but you said you wanted harsh criticism where it's warranted, so here goes...

I liked a few bits in it, but overall, it seemed really uninspired and awkward. There aren't any strong melodies, with the possible exception of a motive heard around 2:45. The harmonies are often fairly interesting. This might work for another genre if revamped a bit, but the style didn't really fit film. Of course, I could be wrong, depending on the scene you chose to write for. What was your scene?