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Hmmmm.... a bit atonal in parts, no? Just kidding. It seemed pretty tight. The only suggestion I would venture to give is maybe next time explore your motives a little more. Like in that rising motive you used, see what kind of mutations and permutations you can come up with in order to build more musical material. Just a thought.
That last note in the trumpets would be a killer. I'm glad I'm not playing it.
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You always find a few lumps of chocolate in a barrel of shit and a few chunks of shit in a barrel of chocolate.
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Music is like food. In other words, it's like sex you can keep in the fridge.
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