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I like it as a fragment; if I understand the type of mood you are trying to get at as regards as 'nereid', sort of capricious ethereal. I'd like to see it developed; maybe 50 such fragments woven together for all the Nereids? (I couldn't do it - but I like the idea); plus maybe some thing big and slightly scary to represent Nereus.
I'm not so sure about the chromatic run in the middle though, doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it, not the energy/rapidity so much but the regularity of a chromatic scale.
Hope I haven't missed the point.
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