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Now, look from your earlier post, you sounded a bit defensive. I was not attacking you in any way. As a matter of fact, my post in response to your piece stated that I liked your fugue. In addition, my very first posts, when I put up my first attempt (c minor) praise your subject construction. So, that being said...
I will only further analyze this because I want to show that I'm not just putting a "sounds good" or "sounds bad" or "capable of better" post. Those notes do work with the harmonic progression and they are fine, yet when I listened to the midi, they seemed to me to jump out of the texture. Looking at it closely, I guess it's because of the alteration of nonharmonic tones. On the & of 1, there is a G D F structure which is dissonant, and on the next sixteenth note there is a G & E. Now in my mind that didn't make immediate sense. This is probably WAY over analyzing, but I was just sharing how I experienced the piece when I listened to it.
I'm sure my pieces have tons of much more awkward moments, and I maintain that I would be glad to have those pointed out to me.
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Shut up about Ligetti and 4:33.
Thank you.
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