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Pretty solid effort. Well-organized, not overly dramatic which is good for a lullaby. That said, I think you could probably do more to develop that first theme. Also, I feel that the transition to G minor at 1:14 could be handled more smoothly? Not quite sure how you'd go about changing it though.
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Andrew Hsieh
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The piano quartet is COMPLETE!!!
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