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Wow! i really liked those! my favorite was the Waltz one. I love the bells and drums in that one! it was really good. However, i have a few minor suggestions for you: I think that the song has too many changes (from loud to soft then to loud again)...(and it the whole echo thing happens too many times). Basically, i'm saying it's just a little too dramatic. But, if you plan on changing it, don't change it drastically because i really do love the song! And my only other complaint is the ending....it comes way to suddently. You need to ease into it....in my opinion.
Now, for the Desert song. I don't like how it turn circus-like every now and then (like at 0:23 and 1:00 for example). I think the song should remain spooky and eery. The circus thing kind of throws the whole thing off...at least i think so. but, the ending was better on this one. It was still abrupt but much better.
Great job! I really really like them! Keep composing.
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