frantz

it is a very well written piece, sober, well balanced and fluent, with flawless harmony and interesting dialogues between solo and orchestra. anyway i think that you could add more fire specially to the solo part. although it is nice as it is, the solo voice is somehow predictable or maybe too much shy, attached always to the same patterns of motion and melodic design which are basicly chords in arpeggio. there is less melodic boldness and adventurousness to this voice than i could expect from a soloist. that can be just my taste, but maybe more surprises, allowing your Muse to open full wings and fly, could add a greater appeal to this already fine composition. best regards.