Hey! Good job!
I like it, although i do agree with them that the solo part could be a little bit more interesting at the beginning. At 3:40 it is very good. Reminds me of Vivaldi, which for me would be a very good thing.
So yeah, at 4:15 about, it sounds sooooo good. Im not sure if its Bach or Vivaldi or who but it sounds great. I like how you repeat it again at 5:27.
Just out of curiosity, what is this scored for? ooooh, nice major chord at the end. As it was coming to it, i was like "hmmm this would be a nice ending" but uve already done it, so good.
I'm not sure if this is a very baroque-ish thing to do, but maybe add a cadenza? Anyway, great job. I look foreward to hearing the other mvmts.
