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Thanks for showing an interest. The internet is awash with music and musicians - hard to take it all in !
Your criticisms are absolutely valid from the point of view of it being a finished work, but in it's current form it is just intended as a 'demo' - a melody, counterpoint bass part, and a set of harmonic changes to be presented to a band for them to interpret as they like.
Having just discovered this forum I may now take care to polish up any future submissions to a higher standard !
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