Very rhythmically novel, and full of inspiration!
I liked this, and it seems you are quite comfortable writing in this type of tonality. It was not very traditionally classical - mostly because of the pop/game type elements of the music. This did not detract from it though - it added to it, making it fresh and interesting.
You did seem to use the same rhythms over and over again though, and you seemed to spend an awful lot of time in Bb major, for the piece being in F, but the music was rather good. Fun stuff
