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your music is very heavily decorated, which is sort of interesting for the genre.
however, the listener very quickly loses any sense of harmonic direction.
I would have preferred to have a few clearer progressions and cadences.
I would also have liked to know what instruments I was supposed to be hearing.
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"Those that know, do;
Those that understand, teach."
-Aristotle-
"toute audace engendrée par l'ignorance cesse d'être une audace et devient une maladresse"
-Debussy-
In musical criticism, when issues of craft and technical consideration are set aside, what remains is more subjective. However, until technical issues are dealt with, the subjective portion bears considerably less weight.
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