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That was great. I regret not having anything more helpful to say, but this isn't really my area of expertise. All I can say is I thought it was effective and well done. In the way of criticism, I did find myself wishing for a bit more dynamic contrast, but I gather this is still something you're still in the process of polishing it up.
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