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Thank you for your words of encouragement and corrections; I was not aware of the Vulgate translation and have added in the enim: it makes for better flow in the first passage anyways.
I've added an updated PDF and MIDI file to the post, and uploaded a new MP3. I don't know what you were talking about with the MP3, as it was of good quality; is it safe to assume that you meant the MIDI was of muddy quality? I fixed that, so it should sound much better. I'd appreciate any further words that you or anyone else might have on the music.
Again, thank you.
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