The Nightfly

I liked the flow of this song. If only it had modulated to some other key, it could have worked even more due to the fact that you limited your register and key which limited the piece to have some variety. But ofcourse this might not be finished yet and also you composed it in only four hours. So when you start working again on this you might consider transposing to a minor key maybe at where this version ended. Also, some sections of the piano introduction was too chordal, consider using passing tones instead of repeated 8th note triads ?

But i think its a good start and could be a lovely little song

Hope this helps !