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Nickthoven - Nice job. I do think however that the beginning was a bit too bland. Chord after chord with no real moving melodic materal or arpeggios. I do like what you have done at about 2:00. Very well done there, but shortly after that it gets a bit weird. (Around 2:45) It seems almost like someone is just hitting random notes on the piano. I'm not trying to sound mean, but that variation is a bit off. I do like the run at 4:09. Sorry, but the ending is weak.
Overall score: 5 out of 10
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]\/[4 - Very nice variation at the beginning. I love what you have done at about 0:40. That definately would be fun to play and listen to as well. At 1:30-2:00...very pretty. Love your use of chords and arpeggios. WOAH, is the stuff at 2:30 even possible to play? It sounds ok, but it would seem a bit too much for someone to play. You might want to slow that down. (Rit. into that section/variation) Same the at 3:00. A bit too fast. It would be much better at a slower tempo. I do love it though...very nice. One question you might want to ask yourself is if you could play this? It would take much work. (Not saying it's impossible. I would definately publish some of these variations. I would love a copy of some of the variations.) At about 9:00 I do think there are a bit too many rips...but I understand it is yet another variation. At 11:10...don't really care for the trill variation. Good job on the 15:00 variation. Woah, 17:00...once again...too fast of a tempo. Only a computer can do that. Same thing with stuff through 18:00...slow it down. I do like what you have done, however. 19:45...just beautiful. Wow, love what you have going on at 20:30, but once again way WAY too fast. Nice ending! Love it! If you can play this and get me a recording, I would pay you well for it. I'm sorry, I could not listen to it all. I don't have the time for the whole thing, but I try to listen to a part of each variation.
Overall score: 9 out of 10.
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Where is the world are the other entrees? I know like 20 people sign up for this.
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