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hey! i really liked this piece! this doesn't sound very newbie-y to me, actuly the chord progression in this one is stunning! and the orchestarization is very cool! i love all of you pizzicato counterpoins, as well as all the other ones on other instruments ( stacato ones ). The main melodyes are great, the melodies in between make excelent transitions and your use of chimes is stunning!!!
I dont have much to remark, but a few counterpoints i found to be too fast, when i felt a cooling down of the atmospher was in order - like that fast pizzcato on 0:32. i dont see why should you use such fast notes, since the effect kinda felt different. the one later one (also pizzicato) on 0:45 for example, is what i think you should change it to ( rhytmicaly not melodical). Thats about it for the remarks.
So to finish off, i ADORE this piece, and i hope to hear more stuff from you soon!
P.S. do you have an mp3 of this piece (or an ogg or something)?
No, I don't have an mp3 or anything else; I do have and mp3 recording with some echo added with my above average midi, but it is not worth much more than the midi itself.
I see what you mean at 0:32 and 0:45; I wrote that part of the song very quickly and didn't really look it over-- yeah, that is too fast. I think I might take your advice...right after I finish this @#$% two page, single spaced history report.
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