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cool
Wow, this is really cool, congrats man. I'll try to get through them all but it might take a couple of days.
P.S. This should get moved to major works
Prelude-The end was unsatisfying. I'm with charlie on almsot everything he said(though he covered it EXTREMELY WELL) exept measure 9 and 10 I loved that part personally. It was my favorite part in the piece. I believe you need to expand on it a bit more at the end though and bring back the melody from 11 again. You need to bring closure to the ideas you brought to the table. Its like you've baked us a nice dinner roll, we take a bite of that then BAM there's the habenaro sauce. It introduces us to a bunch of mashed patotoes really quickly , not one I'm sure goes well with the habenaro sauce though, or maybe not just that quickly. If you expand on these three ideas more you could write over five minutes of music. Please, develop it more.
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