Thanks very much for all your comments, they're all greatly appreciated.
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Originally Posted by Danny Cass
Incidently what did you use for this...Were the instruments samples...Seriously it sounded really good!
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The drums were just one free loop i found, hence the boringness

and both guitars I recorded myself.
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Originally Posted by robinjessome
The progression is nice - perhaps a contrasting section would help balance the tune better. The melody works well - but, again, would benefit from some sort of counter line or harmony.
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Thanks for the advice, perhaps when I can solo over a few more chords (III and V and VI for example

I might add another section, with a different rhythm or something, and I agree about a countermelody, something to fill in the big gaps in the melody.
Thanks so much, Mark