Okay, my honest opinion is that this sounds fantastic! Granted, I won't take up too much of your time here with my attempts at advice, because I think you are already ahead of me (I've never written a choral, and I don't know if I could write one as good as this) The only thing I thought might not be so :In the styly of chorals" Was the consistantly quick chord changes" But then again, That was one of the reasons I liked it so much...Great Progressions. Classical works really good for this I think...
And your right, the midi is horrable for choir, the instruments you chose work much better...
Good Job!
