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I think the piece shows the composers potential for some very good works. It wasn't something that would stick with me and it didn't seem as if it had a real theme either. But I was impressed with the composers use of so many different tools - the use of triplets (3's, 5's, etc.) It definitely had a nice variety in the different passages. If that much variety were used around a concrete subject it would have been much better.
Too me it was just a showing of mechanics that seemed to wander around with no definite purpose to hold on too. I'm still impressed with the variety in your construction and the potential you have though. I look forward to hearing more works by you with a subject that keeps me interested.
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