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I guess we can accept that Bb in m10 in the tenor voice as a passing tone. Better voice leading would be to make that Bb into a C# and put the alto on the G. Also, the spacing between voices is quite far apart - over an octave in some places - in a theory class, I'd count off points for that... But your piece works - nice job.
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