I was just commenting on Accidental Plagarism. And I definitely think that your melody is an example of accidentally plagurizing. But oh well, he got to it first, you got it second.
Overall very good piece, I was expecting tons and tons and tons of repetition, and I didn't hear aaass much as I was expecting. What concerned me is is M.82 the piano and the oboes and flutes, I feel if maybe a french horn is backing them up that would be awesome! then when you repeat it have a different combination of that section. Also I feel the cadenza sorta thing with the piano, it needs to start really flashy, when it gives me the melody again I felt it lost that vroom that you were creating. IF it went immediately flashy (while continuing the main idea) then it would definitely work and I would be in complete awe!
Those are my two problems you develop quite nicely and you rip into that theme like monkeys on bananas!
VEry good JOB
