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haha this piece was fun! really a celebration.
I am also not sure if this comment will apply because this may be what you intended but...
The motive you had throughout the piece, while catchy, got a little tiring. Considering this piece sounds popish or like a video game as someone else mentioned, this could be the intention. Perhaps try changing the key that theme is in or switching the rhythm a bit. Another thing I thought might work is to add more ideas behind the motive instead of just a steady beat to give more groove to it.
Just small ideas. I thought it was very fun. I like it a lot!
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