Very nice! I could really hear the story in this piece. A few thoughts....
You had me completely captivated until the sudden burst at i think 2:40 as wolf said. I'm not sure what that was, maybe the predator, but it seemed to divert me from the "story" you were telling. Afterwords, it was pretty, but I felt like that last theme was too long compared to the others, granted I can't say for sure which was which. Perhaps develop the predator idea more and a little less of the burial? All the ideas are fabulous and I'm really just being picky. I love this piece and the story behind it. Bravo!
