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To Wolf and the Warm-footed Musician ;) -
Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you both seemed to like it :)
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To Wolf's comments:
Yeah, I guess I've always had some trouble with writing the piano part. Not sure why or how to fix it, though I think it may be that I've always seen piano as a solo instrument. I'll try to liven it up with the next edit :)
Oh yeah, the bang at the end of the "predator" portion-- I kind of envisioned it to be when the predator attacks and the Hatchling dies. It was intended to be played by the whole forearm going "bwomp" on the keys-- didn't know how to notate that. :P
And as for the raindrop-y notes-- yeah! That's what I was hoping to convey- awesome that you picked it up :D My music theory is probably nearing the negatives though- I've given up on learning it a long long time ago. Just one of those things.
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To Socks (ahhhh... what should I call you by??)
Thanks -I will try some alternatives to the big cacophonous chord and see how that works out- as I wrote to Wolf above, it was supposed to mark the hatchling's death by the predator, though I bet there are better ways to do it.
Yeah, I feel the same way about the length proportions-- the burial segment was the same thing repeated twice, basically, while the predator section was rushed through and didn't get much elaboration. That is something that I will definitely be working on- thanks for the advice! :D
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