Admire Bach darn yoU!

This needs allllllllloT of work.....

Trying the Baroque style out...

well first of all. Your counterpoint could be a lot better. Try something a little easier. Get a clear theme and then do like a canon or something.

You defy the rules of couterpoint 324059 times...but i do too lol so nobody cares anymore .

Your voices clash causing unfit dissonance (for the style, at least), but my true advice is like...restart. Get a clear theme! I can't hum anything from that piece!

Anyway..those are my two cents. Do you what you will, best of luck!!

Nico ^_^

Well I care about the rules...
(if I would only know them lol)
At the risk of seeming a creepy crawler, I agree with Nico.
accept that in this short piece you allready captured a baroque atmosphere.
there is something off a theme inside but it is not firmly defined. and if it was it would proof to weak to sustain throughout the piece. PLEASE do not give up! start again, and loose the scales.