Any advice? Suggestions?

Hello!

Well this is my very first composition... and I unfortunately have to revive it for a piano recital next week. If anyone has any critiques or suggestions, it would be more than appreciated!

I tried to go for the 'lilting dance meter' of 6/8... which I do quite like, and use a ternary structure - but it just seems kind of... boring? Please don't mind the middle of the peice (after the minor section), it's quite jumbled (I'm still learning harmony assistant!).

Thanks!

yeah i like that nice happy and a bit bouncy.....


although.... it does sound like four difernt songs kinda ....like in one......


all those songs are good like.... but maybe try swapping round the order of the sections.... i dont know really... its kinda good as is.. im jus trying to look for critism if u get me.


i think you'll be fine for your exam though

hi,
semprestaccato , you need to do something with second modulation .


good luck

Thanks very much for the input! yeah... I'm still workin on the whole 'unification' thing... I think I am going to make it shorter too... hm...
Well thanks again!

I'd say touch up the end a bit, it doesn't match the rest