Bayeh Claude piano works

hi
if there is any fault in this piece of music you can tell me to correct them, i didn't study music it is only a hobby, i hope that you enjoy in this pieces of musics.
4 pieces of my compositions:
Bayeh_Claude_14-1-2006_For_Jesus_Rondo_1_(c)
Bayeh_Claude_31-1-2006_for_Jesus_rondo_2_(c)
Claude Bayeh 1-4-2005 St therese dance 3_(c)
Claude Bayeh 13-6-2005 saint esprit_(c)

alright , i listened to the first one and the last one,,,

honestly ,,,didn't really like the first,

the last,,,

now ,that just sounds like a sleepy person pressing random notes,

I also think it might be a good idea for you to post a description of who you are and what your background is.

Simply plunking your music here like that, well... we don't know what to think. Are you a teenager with no background in music? or a middle aged person with a degree in music? In a way, that WILL help to tone the sorts of remarks you get on your pieces.

Originally Posted by Zhukovsky

alright , i listened to the first one and the last one,,,

honestly ,,,didn't really like the first,

the last,,,

now ,that just sounds like a sleepy person pressing random notes,

claude bayeh
hello i didn't study music it is simply a hobby ,i am an electrical engineering and a searcher , i compose music without study any thing

Originally Posted by claude_al_bayeh@hotmail.c

claude bayeh
hello i didn't study music it is simply a hobby ,i am an electrical engineering and a searcher , i compose music without study any thing

yeah i understand,

though you might like your hobby more ,,when your good at it.

...OUCH.

*shot for inserting randomness* I'll listen to these later. My curiosity is officially piqued, but it's like... 1:30 in the bloody morning. *sleep*

i thought these pieces were kind of fun.The first rondo had a catchy theme, but it seemed to repetitive. There seems to be the need for sharper contrast between the main theme sections. It seems redundant because the the other sections have nearly the same feel as the main theme.