Chris: thanks for the feedback. I'll take a closer look on those points, but tbh, I actually enjoy the sound of the violas in EW, and do find them true to reality in general. So... But yes, another critical mind is always good to have.
Mark, Nigel: thanks. Nigel, it took quite a while cause I worked on pencil and paper, then on Finale and then on Cubase... Not... weeks, but days, certainly.
Ron: Honoured for your listening buddy!

And thank you for your compliment! Length: Between you and me, this is from a game (obviously), but the thing is that it's part of an adaptive system of music, which requires and extra 2 layers of the same track to work. If this is 2 minutes (roughly) long, then I need to compose another 4. If it was 3 minutes, I would have to compose 6. I did attempt to keep it "small", but full, since it is a freeware game and I'm not getting paid for this. (<-which btw, also answers your great compliment why I get paid and you are a math teacher (although I've told you to attempt competitions).
EDIT to QCC: I never properly replied to you:
I do think that there is life to tonality, or at least not everything should be ugly ununderstandable music (no tpyo there!

). I think that one can write beautiful music, and there is no harm in doing so. And I have no problem (as you can very well see) in going semi-tonal, or quartal tonal, or totally tonal, actually. Thank you, very much, for listening.