Beth Amphetamine

this is something that i made ...and i wanted to know what you think

Beth Amphetamine
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i don't like the piano melody line (a bit too high for me), but i like how the whole track moves and it has a good feeling of something coming in it as well as in your smuffins track and it ends too fast again. common, ladies need more than one minute of

i felt the hip-hop drumkit didn't really belong.. the overall production could use some work as well.

the composition is, well, ok.

I think there was some critical points where the sound didn't blend and mess as well as I think you could have done. Overall you seem to have a pretty cool style working for you. Good concepts good flow, just better execution on this piece.

I liked this song a fair bit, but I think the drums are wrong too. Maybe use a different kit and make them a bit more simple... Interesting chords/harmony though.