"Bukkehornets kall" for piano and french horn

Originally Posted by IHoldThePenHaHa

1) Consider bringing the Piano up an octave. It is very muddy at the beginning, and hard to listen to. Either that, or reduce the chord (to IE CG instead of CEGC)

I happen to like it where it is... I'm fond of the muddy pounding going on down there, it would take on a different character if you transposed it up and/or eliminated any notes in my opinion.

I just think the B/development section needs lengthened and improved. (and the ending, but I already talked about my opinion on that plenty enough)

Originally Posted by IHoldThePenHaHa

Alright, here's what I have-
1) Consider bringing the Piano up an octave. It is very muddy at the beginning, and hard to listen to. Either that, or reduce the chord (to IE CG instead of CEGC)
2) Nice transition to variation.
3) Owch! I didn't like the ending a bit! What did you think you were doing- it sounded like the piano got lost, and the horn had no idea what note to resolve on!
4) As others have said, the Horn part is very monotonous. Try a B section, or a development of some sort.

It's a good start, but it has a ways to go still. I enjoyed the melody, but thought some things could use some work.

Thanks! 3) The ending isn't as it sounds. I don't know why it's like that. If you listening from it from finale, you can instead of pressing playback, press space and then press on one of the last measures, then it plays as it should be.

Sounds like it can go in a movie scene background where there is a quest or something going on.