Carefree

A composition for solo piano in 7/8.

It's not meant to be a deadly serious composition (as you can tell from the title), but it is meant to convey a sense of joy. So, does it do that?

It is a work in progress - so no dynamics or detail as yet. Also some bars could do with tweaking, possibly a section which contrasts.

Just looking for some general comments as to how you think it looks at the moment. =]

Yes I think it does, its a pretty little piece.
I like the change of melody at around 20 seconds
Also I really enjoyed the ending

Lex

Thanks for such a speedy reply, Lex.

Could you (or anyone really) identify places where it was not "pretty"? I really want to get it as polished as possible, and before I start refining it myself I would like to know what others feel could be improved upon.

A =] is in order: =]

It's good, I personally think the theme in 4/4 that starts at 45 sounds a bit "empty", though I don't know if adding anything would make it better.

Second thought, leave it as it is. It's really fun to listen to.