Claude Bayeh Choral works

hi
if there is any fault in this piece of music you can tell me to correct them, i didn't study music it is only a hobby, i hope that you enjoy in this pieces of musics.
2 Choral works:
Bayeh_Claude_10-8-2006_naissance_de_Jesus_2_(hymne)_(c)
claude bayeh 12-8-2005 je vous salut marie

just as a bit of advice: don't post a choral piece as a MIDI file.
it's impossible to tell where your chorus part is, nor what text you actually set to music.

If you want feedback on your pieces, scores are the best way to go about it.


I just have to add: do you actually know anything about Timpani?
I don't know whether its a problem with the MIDI file or if that staff really IS for timpani, but it's not playable. You're treating the timpani set like some sort of chromatic keyboard instrument.

hello
what program can i use to write the text on the melody in midi form??

He's talking about a score, not a sound file. A score would be in an image format, like .pdf