The Dark Hole Of Your Mind

Originally Posted by last life

I have writen many songs that do have rhymes. I also write alot of poetry that contains ryhmes. This song even has some imperfect rhymes in it (shame/pain, believe/dream, mind/live etc.), that occur at the end of lines, and some perfect ryhmes that aren't placed at the end of the line (we/be, dark/heart, hole/soul etc.). You can have an opinion, but you are wrong in this situation, and also you are implied that I have no skill with this comment

No I did not, you misinterpreted what I said. I said that to write poems that ryhme, takes alot more skill, I never said a word about your ability to write. And there's nothing wrong with imperfect ryhmes, but when a portion of the poem goes something like this for example

I desire to run
My wheelchair binds me
I want to escape, help

That's just random thoughts on a subject, that's not really poetry.

Again, I NEVER said that you didn't have any skill to write

[quote=last life;61692 You can have an opinion, but you are wrong in this situation,[/QUOTE]

Wrong? Or just different? Different doesn't make something right or wrong

It was neat. It was dark, but not rip-your-soul-out-of-your-chest-cavity-and-wail-into-the-blackness-of-the-night-cursing-all-existance dark.

I'd have added a wailing guitar solo, but that's just me. Not that I could write a wailing guitar solo.

I was trying for it to not be a rock song, but simply use distorted guitar in a more er, I don't know, not rock setting. That's the reason for the lack of a guitar solo.

Ahaha... I wrote lots of poetry too (and music also ehehe). Will... I don't always take that you're wrong... if you say something that I agree with I will tell you so in the future... is that a deal ? You're right that it takes a lot of skills to write poetry, but different kinds of poetry exist and just because you've never seen a kind of poetry doesn't make it any less poetry. Anyway... I told you that you were right about that double stop alteration to be erased in my violin piece... eheh. I try as much as possible to tell right from 'wrong' as much as my knowldge and my culture allows it. But one thing is certain I stay respectuous to every body here as long as they don't prove themselves brainless and irrespectuous themselves.

Any way... these comments don't help you in anything Last life so I better stop these here ! ehehe

Originally Posted by Dunael

Ahaha... I wrote lots of poetry too (and music also ehehe). Will... I don't always take that you're wrong... if you say something that I agree with I will tell you so in the future... is that a deal ? You're right that it takes a lot of skills to write poetry, but different kinds of poetry exist and just because you've never seen a kind of poetry doesn't make it any less poetry. Anyway... I told you that you were right about that double stop alteration to be erased in my violin piece... eheh. I try as much as possible to tell right from 'wrong' as much as my knowldge and my culture allows it. But one thing is certain I stay respectuous to every body here as long as they don't prove themselves brainless and irrespectuous themselves.

Any way... these comments don't help you in anything Last life so I better stop these here ! ehehe

I never said that they don't exist, or that they're wrong, I just am more drawn towards poetry that uses clever ryhmes and such. That's just my personal prefrence

Originally Posted by MusicalComposer

'tis be true. But, most Broadway (modern at least) and or the like songs don't rhyme. It should be more like a conversation...

I disagree. Many Broadway songs do rhyme. The ones that don't just sound like a recitative.

I find it funny that people are argueing about conventions when I posted this in "Atonal, Experimental, or Other".