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Old Jun 13 2008, 2:13 PM

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Dark Sonata Op.96

This Piece Has Three Movement In which the part of the first and the second and third are repeated.
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Old Jun 13 2008, 2:25 PM

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well, not just parts are repeated, eh?
It's VERY repetitive all the way through.

A bit of a shame, there are some really nice harmonic colours, but the whole parallelism thing gets boring quickly. It feels a tiny bit too cut-and-pasted together.
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Old Jun 14 2008, 12:13 PM

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blm22,

as mentioned already, this is quite repetitive. I personally don't find this a bad thing, though, and I feel you're creating a nice texture via this repetition.

The second movement felt very 'thin', in a negative way.

I especially liked the third movement, with the gloomy mood created by the octaves and the delicious m. 64-67, whose motive I find repeated later.

Overall, quite enjoyable. Cheers!
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Old Jun 16 2008, 1:23 AM

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well thank you for your reply's
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