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Old Jun 5 2008, 6:56 PM

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A different orchestral piece

lol since the other one got torn up so muc, I decided to just do another one. I like this one much better lol (and the ranges are right.) I'm not going to make a pdf yet because I don't have a pdf converter that works with mac and the score isn't even close to finished yet. If you want to see it and you don't have Finale, get Notepad (which is a useful thin to have anyway.) Comments are appreciated. Working on getting the glissandos and tremolos to carry to midi lol.
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Old Jun 5 2008, 7:48 PM

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Dude, write more.
I don't know where you are even trying to go with this.

Those 5ths in the timpani in the beginning, I don't think they work for the mood you are trying to create. Menacing, right?
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Old Jun 8 2008, 6:26 AM

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More of the piece. Thanks for commenting, Corbin, but I think the fifths in the timpani work fine (unless the glissandos can't be played.) And there's only one lol, what do you mean "fifths?"
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Old Jun 8 2008, 8:15 AM

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how many timpani are you using?
generally, one writes as though there were 4, which is more or less a "traditional" set of timpani.
in the case of your piece here, you would be requiring 2 of the large timpani, which is considerably more unusual. generally speaking, when you add a 5th timp, it's upwards, the small soprano timpani.

that low D, being the lowest note on the 30" timp, is going to sound very flacid. To get the lowest note, as you indicate here, the timpanist needs to relax the drumhead completely. it's not ideal. the sound won't carry as well, and a roll on a relaxed drumhead isn't the best thing either. remember, the best tone is always in the middle range of each drum.

on the woodwinds in your sketch:

why not use 2 oboes instead of requiring the english horn to go so high?

the flute on those descending arpeggios will sound very thin next to a clarinet. that's not the best solution to that particular section. (measures 28-29)
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Old Jun 8 2008, 9:12 AM

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how many timpani are you using?
generally, one writes as though there were 4, which is more or less a "traditional" set of timpani.
in the case of your piece here, you would be requiring 2 of the large timpani, which is considerably more unusual.
I realize that it's not the traditional setup, but I would need 2 to get what I want out of the timpani part. :/ As for the low D, I'll have to fix that. I didn't really take into account the tone quality, (which is something I REALLY need to stop doing. :/)
And I don't really understand your comment about the winds, because there isn't a clarinet playing in m. 28-29. o.O Do you mean the bassoon?
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