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Old May 31 2008, 9:09 AM

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Exclamation Duetto in sol maggiore per 2 violini op. 144

Hi guys,

this is my second musical post on here

it is a duet for 2 violins, i wrote some time ago.. hmm don't know what else to say, hope you like it

thank you all

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Old May 31 2008, 10:40 PM

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hello!

first of all, great piece. You have an excellent grasp of the classical idiom while still making it your own piece.

I have a few complaints, though. I thought that some of your dissonances needed to be resolved (1:21 for example). Also, some of the gaps in the piece break up the flow (2:54 for example). Finally, make sure that you have phrases of a consistent length. That way, the listener won't be confused.

Overall, great piece and it was a pleasure to listen to it.
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Old Jun 1 2008, 8:53 AM

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Hi there

thanks for listeing and for commentig

i'm happy that you liked it! thank you, but can you tell me better about the gaps and the dissonances, because with your timing i didn't see them... so i can correct everything!

thank you again
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Old Jun 4 2008, 4:09 PM

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No more comments??
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Old Jun 4 2008, 8:27 PM

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great piece
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Old Jun 4 2008, 8:43 PM

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