Empty Taste

Hey, I started writing a new piece today. I would appreciate some feedback on it - strengths, weaknesses etc.

You can find it here... New Piece

It's the 0:18 one called Empty Taste, should start playing immediately.

Cheers.

It was very ... how shall I say.... confusing to find it linked to a myspace profile, since it doesn't show up as such. You might consider uploading it somewhere else and direct-linking to it.

It's a very interestering beginning, reminiscent of Final Fantasy music.
Though one might say it would be overly thick for a beginning piece.
Nontheless, interesting, though repetitive, but might turn out very well.

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I've wrote a little more on this piece now, would appreciate some feedback on the chord change and new section. And also some feedback on what the piece makes you feel.

Cheers.

New piece - yes it is a myspace page

Still very short, but beautiful