Fire and Ice (Revised!)

Dev · #11 (**permalink**) May 23 2008, 4:25 PM

EXACTLY

Muzic · #12 (**permalink**) May 26 2008, 1:55 PM

I liked it a lot, especially the climax of the song. I think that your audience will have shivers if you ever had this preformed.

Dev · #13 (**permalink**) Jun 19 2008, 5:19 PM

I have revised this piece - new version is linked to in the original post

tenor10 · #14 (**permalink**) Jun 19 2008, 6:06 PM

I like the new version. The "also" part works so much better now. Mes. 12 still feels heavy but its growing on me. Suffice, should be seperated like this: suf-fice because as a singer im not going to sind suff-ice you sing suuuuf-fiiice. One little thing I missed before.
Very nice.

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