first piano piece

hey everyone.
im intending to compose a piano piece.
but im not a pianist at all.
only a clarinet player.
so my music theory isnt that good!

so if i could get your help/comments/feedback,
it would be really great!
right now im having issues with harmony, chords,
and the whole blend of the piece.

if its weird in any way, lacking of something,
wrong notes anywhere! please do let me know.

its my first attempt so feel free to lash with me with critique!

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im trying this alternative. but the quality is pretty sucky.
i hope it will do for now till i get a better way to present this piece.


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It's a good first attempt

I liked best when it picked up at about 1:30, it just seemed a little better written I guess than the rest of the piece to my ears.

Next time, instead of just trying variations on your original melody, try to develop it a little more.

Pretty good for a first piece. But it did sound like you were repeating the same chords over sometimes. Nice tune

A good piece, I enjoyed this interesting and lovely melody! Of course it would be better to bring some development in the melodic line and maybe to modulate and use one more tonality, because sometimes it sounds a bit monotonously. But anyway, it is magnificent, I love it!

I quite like this piece! The melody is very tuneful and is now still stuck in my head 20 minutes after listening to the piece.
The left hand is a bit repetitive, and maybe you could add variation at times, but as a first attempt, it's brilliant!

[it's similar to my first composition, the left hand is too repetitive on mine]