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Old Jun 8 2006, 1:03 PM

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Ah, come on guys.

Yeah, ok, so I could have given a more detailed review. My bad, I didn't take the piece seriously enough to give it much thought. My bad.

Yeah, definitely try to switch it up a bit. Maybe go into a different key or something.

I always hate giving people suggestions about what to do with their own pieces... because it's not my piece. Who am I to tell them what to do with it?
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Old Jun 8 2006, 3:08 PM

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You don't have to TELL them what to do, just SUGGEST what they could do differently
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Old Jun 8 2006, 9:38 PM

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All it needs is some TLC, I acctually like this one.
I was just playing it and it doesn't sound "bad" but there are some things you can do to spice it up.

Like in certain parts of the Single note melody, it seems just kind of dry because there really isn't anything supporting it.
Which isn't always bad, but you go from those full chords into the single note melody lines and it just isn't as intresting.
I mean nothing bad by what i say, this piece is acctually alot of fun to play.
It's just kind of dry in the harmony aspect.
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Old Jun 8 2006, 11:11 PM

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Were you able to open the score, or did you play it by ear?

either way I'm glad to hear it's fun to play (Music should be fun, it should evoke emotion, otherwise it's just sound coming from vibrations)
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Old Jun 9 2006, 12:16 AM

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well i imported it into powertab editor.
instantly got the score and tablature. =)

Do you mind if i do some editing of my own to the piece and let you hear my variations on it?
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Old Jun 9 2006, 8:48 AM

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Have at it my friend
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Old Jun 9 2006, 10:55 AM

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http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/5/...uerto_Rico.mp3

that's just to give you some ideas on how to spice it up basically.
La grima = Beautiful, it also has wonderfully attractive Harmonies and rhythyms.
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Old Jun 9 2006, 10:58 AM

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VERY cool, I know what you mean now. By the way Meta did you get that piece I sent you?

By the way, what program is that you used?
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Old Jun 9 2006, 11:00 AM

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Anything to do with composing for guitar I use Powertab editor.
To ME it has the best layout and feel.
But everyone has their own opinnions.
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Old Jun 9 2006, 3:23 PM

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