Help me - what shoudl I call this ?

Here's my first composition....made for 2 yrs ago.. it's a sad/emotional cue... it's unnamed - anyone here who can help me ?

Listen here!

hmm.. March for the Missing? reasons, well it's got the snare in the back, has a semi-march type feel, and it sounds like one of those songs where you like see in a movie the part where the guys are just moments from finding themselves home or some'm like that, I dunno, but yeah

Oh, it's SO relaxing. lovely because of its simplicity. Can't you develop it to at least twice the length?
My single comment is that the drum loop is unvarying from beginning to end. A little change here and there might be nice.


But you can compose something like this and not compose a title....wha-a-a-at???.
Call it "Opus 1" or "Dream Softly" or "Summer Eve" or pick a few random words from somewhere based on the numbers of your birthdate.

I would call it "Beyond heaven"

I was so astounded by the beauty and simplicity of your song so I did a little rock ballad remix of the song. Hope you like it!

Oh that was beautiful!! I'm very impressed, nice work!

I also made this : Listen here :-)

Another version

Takk for navnet "Beyond heaven", mycket bra !

mycket bra !

Oh dear. Is it the underwiring?

The inspiration keeps coming so I did an extended remix of your song with a second melody, based on the feeling your melody generates. This remix is in mp3 but I also upload a raw midi containing my new melody, if you want to use it. I also got some inspiration from your last version. I heard you changed to C, so I used this change in the end of the remix to give the song a happier ending, Well that’s all for me - over and out!

Remix of "Beyond Heaven' song (mp3 - 3 mb)

PS: Dansk eller norsk?