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Old Jul 22 2008, 5:33 PM

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Invention in d minor

Hi, this is my new piano composition, I would like very much to hear your opinion. Here is mp3: Invention in d n.2.mp3. Unfortunatelly, I don't have the scores right now, but I'm working on it
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Old Jul 22 2008, 6:03 PM

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I may be wrong, but each exposition of the theme is in the same key (d minor). An exposition in the dominant, subdominant or relative major is expected.
I like the piece anyway!
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Old Jul 22 2008, 7:07 PM

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very nice, i realy liked the sequence at 23 seconds
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Old Jul 23 2008, 7:34 AM

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Thanx for the comments. Yes, each exposition of the theme is in the same key - because I thought that transposition to relative major sounds boring and eventually I decided not to use it. Maybe it was a mistake. Any other suggestions are welcome too, the piece is not in it's final form.
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Old Jul 23 2008, 7:37 AM

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Old Jul 23 2008, 8:04 AM

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Thanks for posting the score! The piece is not boring, I think you've managed to create enough contrast with the dynamics; jut sounded unusual for me at first. But I like it very much!
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Old Jul 23 2008, 3:47 PM

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Thank you Matthaeus, it's nice to know that someone likes my music
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Old Jul 24 2008, 1:56 AM

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Your music is as pretty as you. Congrats on a fine work.
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very pleasant piece of music, please post the score
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Old Jul 24 2008, 3:43 PM

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she did in a later post
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