Journey (movie theme?)

I listened to it and thought it sounded very professional. I could easily see it as movie music. In fact, it sounds ok to me as stand alone music, but it is suggestive of being the basis for a more contextual theme.

In fact the abrupt ending is very suggestive of a change in move scene. I think for it to be stand alone it would need something more done at the end. Either slow down to a close, fade out, or build up to a more convincing abrupt end. I think the ending as it is needs more context to make sense of why it quite so suddenly.

Just my thoughts.

i like it.
i can see fit in a movie easily.
the ending to me is fine.

Ok so i'm bringing this piece back from the dead but I only have an ending for it no middle part to go along with it. Just in case you didn't read up top there will be a measure of rest then the ending will begin it'll be obvious. So I wll try to get the whole thing up in about a month or so.. (does that sound familiar haha)

I love it! Especially the mallet stuff you got going on. I also like the extensive exploration of 6/4 rhythms. But yeah, I play horn, and if it was me, i wouldn't make them play any higher than a G or Ab above the staff (concert C and Db). Just consider that and whatever else people have said and it'll be perfect.

Ok... yes I finally finished this piece after almost a year. I just could not find a way to go after I stopped writting so I kept putting it off and putting it off. I still dont think the end of this is the same quality as the begining but ah well I was ready to end it.